Friday, January 16, 2009

In my search for you



Under the twilight, beyond the sun’s rays
In this world there’s not left a place.
Across the bridge and over the mountain
I’ve looked for you, but all in vain.

“Oh bird! Fly in the sky and look for him
At dawn or dusk, even if the light’s dim”
Thus, I requested a fluttering sparrow,
To fly and search for you, high and low.

“Oh moon! Shine down to wherever he is
Urge him to return, could you do that please?”
The shimmering moon and the glittery stars,
Promised to search, even if you’re on mars.

“Oh spring! Along your journey from hills to sea,
If he gulped you down his throat, notify me”
Thus, gushed from the earth the mountain spring,
But any message from you, it failed to bring.

“Oh rain! Dry my tear, form a cloud,fall on his cheek
Rain in deserts too for his whereabouts I can seek.
I asked the rainbow, the clouds and the fountain,
“Will he be receiving the same splattering rain?”

“Oh breeze! Transcending lands beyond I can see
Pervasive that you are, now listen to my plea--
Blow over to where he is, spread the same fragrance
Tell him I’m waiting to caress his hair so dense”

Beneath the deepest trench, beyond the farthest land,
In the ice or the forests or under the rocks or sand.
I’ll keep searching for you, and will never lose hope.
Nature joined in my search for you, so there’s scope.



13 comments:

  1. Hey comrade
    really nice work.

    wow!
    keep up the good work!

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  2. hey there's no end to this world as the world is not flat :P
    well however keep searching, eventually you'll find him!!!

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  3. @ sorcerer ..thanx for the comment

    @ ashish...yes hopefully i will find him someday

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  4. hey intense searchin..eh..

    search! search ! search! nature will join u..

    keep writin aparna

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  5. yes jaggu..i'm still hunting for him

    nature is helping me out

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  6. Fine and fetastic blog u hve and teach me some guide line to improve my blog ok

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  7. definitely malikarjun
    just contact me cia mail and i'll teach u whatever i know

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  8. Hmm... that's the kind of romanticism you see in my thoughts. I like it. I call it.... classical romanticism where romance is way of life and not just a desperation.

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  9. really loved it....

    my fav lines were right at the beginning...

    ""
    Under the twilight, beyond the sun’s rays
    In this world there’s not left a place.
    Across the bridge and over the mountain
    I’ve looked for you, but all in vain.

    ''''

    i'm a sucker for romantic poems expressed in small words....kinda perky...

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  10. this one is a really nice poem...
    clever use of words..make it quite artistic. Well done friend!!

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  11. abhyu: romanticised thoughts are the way of a poet
    thx for reading

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  12. arun: just try writing..poems r not tht difficult

    unlisten, mk: thx for reading

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