tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post7170557862746677744..comments2023-10-17T06:38:37.355-07:00Comments on Life Takes: On The Boulevard Of Hope Filled DreamsAparna (Life Takes)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10317107449181119426noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-88097402739558156582009-05-03T09:10:00.000-07:002009-05-03T09:10:00.000-07:00I live to see the light of the day--
The day when ...I live to see the light of the day--<br />The day when we would meet;<br />The day of melting miles;<br /><br /><br />moved me to tears...i couldnt help but think about my dhakkan while reading this one... not ever sure if i'd ever get to touch him... i wonder why do i love him... but then.. why should'nt i...<br /><br />i so wish to go through the structure in the poetic sense...but everytime i read this... i cannot help but cry sweet tears... <br /><br />all i can say is...to hell goes the structure...<br />this one is the bestest write i'v ever ever ever ever read in my entire life....<br /><br />take care and keep smiling... :)Dreams_Untamedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16918754694265432737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-876832353286667782009-03-12T21:07:00.000-07:002009-03-12T21:07:00.000-07:00Beautiful Heart Touching Poem :) Really Liked a lo...Beautiful Heart Touching Poem :) Really Liked a lot:)Creativityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15541499368294604436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-1176613626858920122009-03-07T09:44:00.000-08:002009-03-07T09:44:00.000-08:00Hmm, ok it was really good.. not many glitches the...Hmm, ok it was really good.. not many glitches there in the poem, so i can't criticise much (damn it :P)<BR/><BR/>Anyways, honestly, it was a good poem..<BR/><BR/>The writing style could be one with more flow though and the words used sometimes don't do justice..<BR/><BR/>But all in all, a good poem!<BR/><BR/>Keep smiling :) and keep rocking \m/Anweshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05148205774782542581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-38052247056080797832009-03-05T03:15:00.000-08:002009-03-05T03:15:00.000-08:00hey.....brilliant writin'....fell in luv......will...hey.....brilliant writin'....fell in luv......will visit again...:)Santanu.......https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235742041365590961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-85418975832254064202009-03-03T18:43:00.000-08:002009-03-03T18:43:00.000-08:00beautiful poem...really loved the "close enough" v...beautiful poem...<BR/>really loved the "close enough" verses....explaining the seperation.....loved em..<BR/><BR/>P.S.<BR/>how much time did it take u to write this..???<BR/>My guess is ...days..??Arun Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632850254083824460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-14334007313436686122009-03-02T10:49:00.000-08:002009-03-02T10:49:00.000-08:00Close enough ... Totally awesome !!The second half...Close enough ... Totally awesome !!<BR/><BR/>The second half, explaining wait for love is a picture of my heart these days ... <BR/><BR/>Lovely...Thanks.<BR/><BR/>Cheers,<BR/>adishaAdishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06757598390608351897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-43100533116525551942009-03-02T09:40:00.000-08:002009-03-02T09:40:00.000-08:00Thinking about,all I ever wanted to express,but yo...Thinking about,<BR/>all I ever wanted to express,<BR/>but you weren’t any near to listen to me<BR/><BR/>beautifully expressed emotions n pain of being awayअविनाशhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07179380257537462601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-44403412870917498072009-03-02T01:45:00.000-08:002009-03-02T01:45:00.000-08:00WOW !beautiful!I love your blog!WOW !<BR/>beautiful!<BR/>I love your blog!PhilO♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/02754122680372548153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-5122322711929880252009-03-01T20:23:00.000-08:002009-03-01T20:23:00.000-08:00nice one..really:)nice one..really:)broca's areahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978879187404578908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-87273363772848945392009-03-01T09:49:00.000-08:002009-03-01T09:49:00.000-08:00hey that was truly beautiful one...it reminded me ...hey that was truly beautiful one...it reminded me of my lost love.. i could actually relate this poem to my story and while i8 was reading this poem,i was only thinking bout him...great way of expressing your thoughts!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-35775121327485177672009-03-01T07:26:00.000-08:002009-03-01T07:26:00.000-08:00Very nice poem. Really beautiful :)Very nice poem. Really beautiful :)Useless Buggerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06528426508053018433noreply@blogger.com