tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post1837544754990387384..comments2023-10-17T06:38:37.355-07:00Comments on Life Takes: Of Promises Kept And BrokenAparna (Life Takes)http://www.blogger.com/profile/10317107449181119426noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-67143985261765804872009-01-11T20:06:00.000-08:002009-01-11T20:06:00.000-08:00It's beautifully written... keeps the reader right...It's beautifully written... keeps the reader right upto the end...Akansha Agrawalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057813784400638070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-36794101366330568362009-01-05T11:08:00.000-08:002009-01-05T11:08:00.000-08:00It's a very beautiful story though it was predicta...It's a very beautiful story though it was predictable...you're writing style is pretty good but somewhere the strain of thoughts are rather disconnected in the story..but it holds ur attention till the end somehowNihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631205656534363299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-88032630330183475582009-01-01T08:36:00.000-08:002009-01-01T08:36:00.000-08:00Thanx anwesh..for ur honest review. Will improve n...Thanx anwesh..for ur honest review. Will improve next time.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Folks ! Thanx for all ur comments. Loved them!Aparna (Life Takes)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10317107449181119426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-22402475091650785162009-01-01T06:16:00.000-08:002009-01-01T06:16:00.000-08:00Ok.. i will be honest.. Ur story.. had a good plot...Ok.. i will be honest.. <BR/><BR/>Ur story.. had a good plot but very boring and predictable plot.. so u lose out there..<BR/><BR/>Your backdrop was even more cliche.. like some bollywood film picked up and penned down.. <BR/><BR/>Writing style was broken.. confusing.. not that impressive.. ur broken lines never actually made sense.. and ur story seemed like a slideshow to me rather than something that was flowing.. <BR/><BR/>The story had died even before 'she' died.. <BR/><BR/>And then u kept dragging it on and on and on...<BR/><BR/>Ok, i know this comment is rude.. but am being honest.. Didn't like it..<BR/><BR/>But th words u use.. they are good.. ur writing style.. is ok sorta.. ur emotional work is good.. appreciate that..<BR/><BR/>Advice: Try and cut down on the flashy stuff..<BR/><BR/>Be more original in approach..<BR/><BR/>And write from the point of view which interests one.. <BR/><BR/>Still.. good work<BR/><BR/>Take care..<BR/><BR/>Keep smiing :)Anweshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05148205774782542581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-49156726110726793302008-12-31T12:08:00.000-08:002008-12-31T12:08:00.000-08:00why do people have to die in love stories :(why do people have to die in love stories :(insanely~positivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00552209846403715644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-40724815675033215982008-12-28T02:08:00.000-08:002008-12-28T02:08:00.000-08:00n also check out the stories i've written if u lik...n also check out the stories i've written if u like...they are labelled as "love-fiction"....Arun Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632850254083824460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-1301248483527471452008-12-28T02:06:00.000-08:002008-12-28T02:06:00.000-08:00nice story....i also like to write stories...haven...nice story....<BR/>i also like to write stories...havent done in a while...<BR/>I write about instances rather than full stories...<BR/>n i was surprised u didnt write the story from a gal's point of view...I usually write stories in my point of view....<BR/><BR/>ur story tells a lot about u...Arun Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15632850254083824460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-68440599915761129102008-12-20T21:02:00.000-08:002008-12-20T21:02:00.000-08:00[read my post on blog anniversary and be a part of...[read my post on blog anniversary and be a part of it:)]broca's areahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978879187404578908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-31795002166728490442008-12-18T07:38:00.000-08:002008-12-18T07:38:00.000-08:00so did it get published?very well written.the back...so did it get published?<BR/><BR/>very well written.<BR/><BR/>the background was a bit sore on the eye :)<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://kaber-vasuki.blogspot.com/2008/12/blind-boy-with-rubiks-toy.html" REL="nofollow">#</A><BR/><BR/>cheers<BR/>kaberKaber Vasukihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08441632102456729780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-25729776993137549792008-12-15T01:13:00.000-08:002008-12-15T01:13:00.000-08:00hey, touching story. although it got a bit cliched...hey, touching story. although it got a bit cliched wid her dying, the ending, saying that she kept her promise with her life was nice:)<BR/><BR/>nice description of emotions too<BR/><BR/>Cheers<BR/>CRD<BR/><BR/>(bloggeratti)CRDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14040468252329133910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-10508871541858273142008-12-14T23:53:00.000-08:002008-12-14T23:53:00.000-08:00That was a good one...I loved the lines “Hey don't...That was a good one...I loved the lines “Hey don't be so gloomy! Do you think I'll die so easily and sacrifice you to the other pretty girls !!?? No way! I'll be there for you...always...forever.”<BR/><BR/>Rock On...!<BR/><BR/>B/W I hate catchpas...he hedrwizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709394242956168469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-64550653892345894562008-12-13T23:02:00.000-08:002008-12-13T23:02:00.000-08:00hey appu (aa juz felt like calling u so, after rea...hey appu (aa juz felt like calling u so, after readind d story) yu've touched my heart. iz wonderful ra. <BR/>i wanna hear smethng from u, on my blog.ayurdharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00920630773948981166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-3198677479418524962008-12-13T08:14:00.000-08:002008-12-13T08:14:00.000-08:00story is fabulous.i almost cried in the last..look...story is fabulous.i almost cried in the last..looking forward for more...keep writing :)dreamer..susw3t@https://www.blogger.com/profile/08662318545985225076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-74911575292510348392008-12-13T02:39:00.000-08:002008-12-13T02:39:00.000-08:00really good one...it was quite long...but u held m...really good one...it was quite long...but u held my interest till the end...hope to read more such posts!Mohammed Musthafahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10211307048155699461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-64190062697583840992008-12-11T21:41:00.000-08:002008-12-11T21:41:00.000-08:00at first I thought I would read it after a while.....at first I thought I would read it after a while.......but I don't know why something made me read this.....after a while I was deeply engrossed in the story.......I was feeling the characters.....I was going through their emotions........I was experiencing their pain........I was trying to fake myself that it is only a story......but these kindaa incidents keep happening in our society.... a very recent post on my blog also dealt with an unkept promise but It was real.........And about the blogger:<BR/>hmmmmm<BR/>Aparna is a much matured writer than what I first felt about her....<BR/>I know she'll someday write novels...and I would be reading one of her works and saying to my offsprings...."she is my friend.."<BR/><BR/>I'm waiting for more posts lady.....Ashish Gouravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13367298859443158406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-74741057869735528872008-12-11T21:19:00.000-08:002008-12-11T21:19:00.000-08:00i often miss some nice blogs....i don't want miss ...i often miss some nice blogs....i don't want miss ur's....nicely kept...shafeeq shahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915924523380135265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-12538351578315251582008-12-11T09:03:00.000-08:002008-12-11T09:03:00.000-08:00hi.... lemme comment on the literary aspect first....hi.... lemme comment on the literary aspect first...<BR/><BR/>Very well written, but den i could guess dat the gal was supposd to die... dats getting common. <BR/>You writing is very professional. but please don keep such flashy background. It makes it difficult to read. Your style is very mch similar to that of Chris Kuzneski though. Take it as a cmplement as he is a great author.<BR/><BR/>Four lines touched my heart...<BR/> "I was scared.<BR/> True.<BR/> I was scared for her.<BR/> A lie."<BR/><BR/>Great meaning in jus few words.Aershhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08984501851548576585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-856738629142282962008-12-10T11:21:00.000-08:002008-12-10T11:21:00.000-08:00Very nice and beautiful story and it really touche...Very nice and beautiful story and it really touched my heart, believe me...only the background of your blog was making it difficult to read it.<BR/><BR/>People who we love are always with us even if they leave us and go far away...they remain in our hearts.<BR/>Keep the good work on and i look forward to read more of your work and all the best for your book which is going to be published.<BR/><BR/>Regards,<BR/>Nazish Rahman<BR/>http://www.nazishrahman.blogspot.comNRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17987719285041286082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-84096338450768973432008-12-10T09:13:00.000-08:002008-12-10T09:13:00.000-08:00hey thnx for droppin by my blog and wow @ ur blog ...hey thnx for droppin by my blog and wow @ ur blog good writings keep rockingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-58973311154275832112008-12-10T08:08:00.000-08:002008-12-10T08:08:00.000-08:00Good narrative flair... Could visualize the story ...Good narrative flair... Could visualize the story as it unwrapped.,. <BR/><BR/>Keep Expressing !!Prashant Sreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07028728984318324067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-92094001614918248932008-12-10T07:18:00.000-08:002008-12-10T07:18:00.000-08:00Good. Really good. This is the first story of your...Good. Really good. This is the first story of yours I read, and now I'm gonna go and read the rest ^__^<BR/><BR/>Well it was sad, but well handled. The romantic tragedy stuff was well done. :) But there's one thing...The ending(i.e. his emotions after her death) was drawn out too much..could've been shorter. The story just seemed to drag on, after her death.<BR/><BR/>Other than that, well done!Prithwishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405998624320703307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-52794197913379971132008-12-10T05:56:00.000-08:002008-12-10T05:56:00.000-08:00Beautiful images!c u!Beautiful images!<BR/><BR/>c <BR/>u<BR/>!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-85011962653065452042008-12-10T05:43:00.000-08:002008-12-10T05:43:00.000-08:00nice one...:)...good narration...but i guessed the...nice one...:)...good narration...but i guessed the ending;)....<BR/><BR/>p.s- is there any girl who isnt talkative in this world???broca's areahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978879187404578908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-81053072380221030712008-12-10T04:40:00.000-08:002008-12-10T04:40:00.000-08:00well writtenwell writtenYayaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10567482260999422784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5327542665853853362.post-53473321346407802302008-12-10T00:57:00.000-08:002008-12-10T00:57:00.000-08:00very nicely written story.... some of the lines ar...very nicely written story.... some of the lines are very expressive.... kudos... there is a poem "MEMORY" in my blog.... which i think goes along really nicely with ur story...neways.... keep postin...Jaspreet Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01515125346595198132noreply@blogger.com